Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued by some people that it is
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better for
particular
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group of
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adolescents
to
study
with classmates together on a project,
while
for others better to
study
themselves. Despite studying alone can
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more freedom for students
making
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to make
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tasks more
individually
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,
to
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study
in a collective more beneficial, for having more interesting
process
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processes
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, and communication skill development. Boys and girls who prefer
study
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alone, usually
make
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project
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projects
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and
hometasks
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home tasks
through
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their individual
view point
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viewpoint
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. In
this
case, every
words
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,
design
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and design
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choosen
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chosen
by
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a person
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, even
it
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if it
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is wrong and not appropriate for
task
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the task
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.
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,
him
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or her, have
ability
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to represent own identity
,
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and reflect it on
assignment
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the assignment
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.
However
, repeating doing work alone
become
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kind of
rouitine
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routine
for a schoolar and
lead
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leads
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to
moment
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a moment
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when
learnign processs
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learning processes
will
be
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drop out. On the
onther
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other
hand, those who
study
together, pass the
time
more entertaining and reveal more crucial skills. Pitching own
idia
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ideas
for other people,
trying
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to solve arguments throughout the process develop communication skills.
Also
,
studing
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studying
with friends,
make
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makes
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the
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time
more exciting, as it
dull
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, and tough
anymore
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.
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,
do
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a
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part
for
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a shared task with other students brings more, like improving communication
skill
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skills
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and
entertaining
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time
, rather
studying
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alone, where you
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get
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bored every
time
.
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Content Development
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Organization
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Task Response
Revisit the essay prompt to ensure a balanced discussion of both views before presenting your opinion. Finish with a clear conclusion that summarizes your view effectively.
Task Engagement
Your essay presents an opinion and attempts to discuss both viewpoints, which is essential for the task.
Conclusion Effort
The attempt to conclude and state a clear preference shows good essay structure awareness.

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