The pie charts show the sources of electricity in the four countries from 2003 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how much the sources of electricity were produced in
India
, Sweden
, Morocco
, and Vietnam
from 2003 to 2008.
Overall
, There was a similarity of hydropower as a majority source in
producing electricity in Change preposition
apply
Morocco
and Sweden
, while
it was fossil fuel in India
and Vietnam
. Besides
, Vietnam
and Morocco
were two countries that had no contribution of nuclear power.
From 2003 to 2008, the number of hydropower generating electric power in Morocco
and Sweden
was 95% and 52%, respectively compared to 44% in Vietnam
and far less than 14% in India
. Similarly
, the figure for fossil fuel in Vietnam
and India
was 56% and 82% in that order, which far exceeds Morocco
and Sweden
at around 4%.
However
, there are only 2 countries that use nuclear power in order to produce electricity which was
Wrong verb form
are
India
and Sweden
at 4% and the highest number at 44%, respectively.Submitted by nguyenhuyhoa1506 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words india, sweden, morocco, vietnam with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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