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The pie charts show the sources of electricity in the four countries from 2003 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the sources of electricity in the four countries from 2003 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates how much the sources of electricity were produced in
India
,
Sweden
,
Morocco
, and
Vietnam
 from 2003 to 2008.
Overall
, There was a similarity of hydropower as a majority source
in
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producing electricity in
Morocco
 and
Sweden
,
while
 it was fossil fuel in
India
 and
Vietnam
.
Besides
,
Vietnam
 and
Morocco
 were two countries that had no contribution of nuclear power. From 2003 to 2008, the number of hydropower generating electric power in
Morocco
 and
Sweden
 was 95% and 52%, respectively compared to 44% in
Vietnam
 and far less than 14% in
India
.
Similarly
, the figure for fossil fuel in
Vietnam
 and
India
 was 56% and 82% in that order, which far exceeds
Morocco
 and
Sweden
 at around 4%.
However
, there are only 2 countries that use nuclear power in order to produce electricity which
was
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India
 and
Sweden
 at 4% and the highest number at 44%, respectively.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words india, sweden, morocco, vietnam with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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