The table below gives the information about the co2 production released by give countries that produced the most in 2005 and 2006.

The table below gives the information about the co2 production released by give countries that produced the most in 2005 and 2006.
The above table illustrates the CO2 emissions data in three distinct columns, presenting an
overall
change , production and release of the relevant gas in terms of per-person measures in the years 2005 to 2006.
According to
the illustration,
firstly
there is a noticeable increase in the total production of CO2 with no reduction in any way in every country mentioned. With regards to per capita emissions USA , Russia and Japan are top producers of greenhouse gases
while
other nations follow behind in that metric.
Secondly
, there is another measure which presents a general shift or increase in the release of gases in which
countries
like China and India dominate representing 11% and 8% respectively,between the two years. In conclusion, it can be seen that
while
each individual has been producing more CO2 in developed
countries
, the reverse is true for developing
countries
while
at the same time, these
countries
are noticing an increased level of emissions.
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