The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.
The graph illustrates
jam's
Change noun form
jam
sale
for each of Fix the agreement mistake
sales
five
categories in the Correct article usage
the five
period
from 2009 to 2024. Those categories was
namely Change the verb form
were
Strawberry
, Raspberry, Grape, Cherry, and Plum.
Overall
, the sale
of all jams, except Plum, witnessed an upward trend during that period
. The Strawberry
Jam
consistenly
ranked the highest, Correct your spelling
consistently
eventhough
in 2012, it was once surpassed by Raspberry Correct your spelling
even though
Jam
, with the difference widening the following year.
The sale
of strawberry
jam
, in 2009, started at just above 3, followed by a slight increase
in 2010 and a significant increase
in 2011 at around 3.5 and above 4.5, respectively. Then
it climbed sharply between period
2012 and 2014.
Correct article usage
the period
Regardings Raspberry
, Its sales began at nearly 3, but Correct your spelling
Regarding raspberry
it
surpassed those of Correct pronoun usage
they
strawberry
jam
sale
after climbing sharply in 2012, Fix the agreement mistake
sales
then
it was back to a small increase
, leaving the strawberry
took
the lead again.
Between Change the verb form
to take
those
Change the determiner
that period
those periods
period
, the figure of
cherry Change preposition
for
jam
sales witnessed a small increase
, with some fluctuations. However
, it decrease
steadily with little variation in the next following years after reaching a low point of less than 2 in 2011 and a high point of more than 3 in 2012.
The Grape's figure witnessed a gradual rise throughout those given Wrong verb form
decreased
period
, reaching a peak of roughly 5 in 2014. Fix the agreement mistake
periods
By contrast
, at the same time, the plum's figure was the only one to gradually decline, reaching a low point of 0 in 2014.Submitted by msdedew10 on
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