The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.
The graph illustrates
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jam's
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jam
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sale
for each of Fix the agreement mistake
sales
five
categories in the Correct article usage
the five
period
from 2009 to 2024. Those categories Use synonyms
was
namely Change the verb form
were
Strawberry
, Raspberry, Grape, Cherry, and Plum.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
sale
of all jams, except Plum, witnessed an upward trend during that Use synonyms
period
. The Use synonyms
Strawberry
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Jam
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consistenly
ranked the highest, Correct your spelling
consistently
eventhough
in 2012, it was once surpassed by Raspberry Correct your spelling
even though
Jam
, with the difference widening the following year.
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sale
of Use synonyms
strawberry
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jam
, in 2009, started at just above 3, followed by a slight Use synonyms
increase
in 2010 and a significant Use synonyms
increase
in 2011 at around 3.5 and above 4.5, respectively. Use synonyms
Then
it climbed sharply between Linking Words
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period
2012 and 2014.
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the period
Regardings Raspberry
, Its sales began at nearly 3, but Correct your spelling
Regarding raspberry
it
surpassed those of Correct pronoun usage
they
strawberry
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jam
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sale
after climbing sharply in 2012, Fix the agreement mistake
sales
then
it was back to a small Linking Words
increase
, leaving the Use synonyms
strawberry
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took
the lead again.
Between Change the verb form
to take
those
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that period
those periods
period
, the figure Use synonyms
of
cherry Change preposition
for
jam
sales witnessed a small Use synonyms
increase
, with some fluctuations. Use synonyms
However
, it Linking Words
decrease
steadily with little variation in the next following years after reaching a low point of less than 2 in 2011 and a high point of more than 3 in 2012.
The Grape's figure witnessed a gradual rise throughout those given Wrong verb form
decreased
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period
, reaching a peak of roughly 5 in 2014. Fix the agreement mistake
periods
By contrast
, at the same time, the plum's figure was the only one to gradually decline, reaching a low point of 0 in 2014.Linking Words
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