The maps below show changes in the city of Castellon in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show changes in the city of Castellon  in recent times.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figures illustrate the changes that have taken place in Castellon city in Spain from the year 2000 to the present.
Overall
,
it is clear that
only the park and the university remain unchanged.
However
, lots of facilities spring up and the purpose of the route is revised.
Firstly
, the forest which is located on the right-hand side of the academy was wiped out and replaced by a new department store as same as the train station that was reconstructed and became a police station. There were three new facilities that sprung up including a hall of residence, a new train station and the tramline connected between the university and the park.
Moreover
, a new airport is still constructing.
Secondly
, a new bike rental scheme has been launched in the old park and
also
the old market on the left was rebuilt into a new shop and another shop located under the airport was set up. A new purpose of the old route has been introduced to allow for pedestrians only.
Additionally
, a cinema, bars and clubs were built by the sea
while
the port stayed untouched.
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