The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962.
The three different diagrams indicate Meadowside town and Fonton, a neighbouring village layout and how it has changed for the years 1962,1985, and the present.
By comparing the three maps,
it is clear that
this
place has undergone diverse development along with
improvements which includes
the construction of a new hotel, a business park, and a supermarket.
Before the development, in 1962, the layout of the village seemed very simple and underdeveloped Change the verb form
include
while
in 1985, two roads were added and a leisure complex entre built near the road. Next to the leisure building, a housing area was built and across the street
we can see a store.
By looking at the Add a comma
street,
last
diagram, it is clear that
diverse infrastructure had built
, Add a missing verb
been built
for instance
, a hoteland
a station, and a park.The hotel and station are located centre of the village and Correct your spelling
hotel
business
park is Correct article usage
the business
sited
the south part of the map. Verb problem
situated in
In addition
, one more train road has built
. Add a missing verb
been built
Furthermore
, the area was entirely expanded.Submitted by wowoo04066 on
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