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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels off sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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 amount of sugar which leads to many diseases is being manufactured in lots of
food
 and beverages and I agree that increasing the
prices
 of them can prevent individuals from consuming more sugar because sugar makes people overweight and the high
prices
 are the best way to decrease sales. The glucose rates in things we consume are too high for our
body
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 and cause obesity, and the owners of the markets ought to adjust the
prices
 to prevent unhealthy shopping. We all know the primary reason for weight gain is our eating habits
such
 as eating too much junk
food
 or candy. I think because of these
type
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 of packaged
food
being
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 the cheapest in the shopping industry, we can easily purchase them without paying much and a price regulation would be highly effective on our
behavior
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.
For example
, managers can only sell the
carbonhydrated
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carbohydrate
food
 with high quality. High
prices
 for packaged
food
such
 as chocolate, candy and coke and normal values for healthy alternatives
such
 as
dryed
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dry
 fruits and vegetables would stop humans from eating and drinking too much sweets. Buyers compare the worth levels of the object when buying them, and a considerable gap between the two options would encourage them to pick the cheaper and healthier one. It is my opinion that many would pick the healthy alternative just to escape from the fact that they buy overpriced merchandise. In conclusion, I believe to decrease the consumption rates of glucose, certain entities and people ought to increase the value of it because it will deter customers from making an unreasonable purchase.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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