The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram provides information pertaining to the operation of a geothermal power plant utilized for electricity generation. In essence, the cycle comprises five distinct phases, commencing with the initial step of cold
water
being pumped downwards and advancing towards the eventual production of energy.
Initially
, it is imperative to accumulate cold
water
within a designated reservoir, following which it is directed through a 4.5 km pipeline for
further
processing.
Subsequently
, the
water
is introduced into an injection well during the second
phase
, where it undergoes heating from hot rocks present within the geothermal zone. The third
phase
involves the
water
being pumped upwards through a conduit and
subsequently
entering the condenser. Proceeding
further
, the fourth
phase
entails the
water
undergoing evaporation and transitioning into a turbine, which is propelled by steam.
Lastly
, in the fifth and final
phase
, the generator, fueled by the turbine, facilitates the conversion of
water
steam into electrical energy
that is
then
made available for utilization in the infrastructure.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, phase with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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