The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant.
The map illustrates a project
that is
led by a country that has decided to establish a new restaurant in the central part of Paris.
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To begin
with, the first Linking Words
location
is located by the river in the direction of Birhakim Bridge, which is in the western area. The proximity of it to the Martini Museum, which has 8,000 visitors per day, is a positive point for the restaurant. There is a park to the west of Use synonyms
this
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location
, which makes its atmosphere more charming.
The second situation between the Eiffel Tower and the Enclosed Art Museum will be remarkable. There is a park in the south, and the Sein River is visible in the north. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
neighborhood
around the Eiffel Tower will allow the restaurant to always have guests to serve.
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neighbourhood
To sum up
, it can be apparently seen that Linking Words
location
2 is likely to attract more customers than Use synonyms
location
1, since the number of visitors to the Eiffel Tower is as much as two times that to the Maritime Museum.Use synonyms
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