The chart below shows the umber of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the umber of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of households in the United States referring to yearly
income
from 2007 to 2015 in every 4 years. It is classified into 5
groups
including households’s
income
of less than $25,000 to more than $100,000 with a range of $25,000. In general, the highest total of households was families who got paid more than $100,000 in 2015.
On the other hand
, the lowest was family who got paid approximately $75,000 to $99,999 in 2007. The trend of a family’s
income
around less than $74,900
that is
classified into 3
groups
is similar. In 2011, the number of families that get paid less than $74,900 increased moderately.
Otherwise
, these
groups
experienced a decrease in 2015. Other
groups
, families whose
income
was more than 74,900, decreased in 2011. In 2015, these
groups
experienced growth, especially
groups
of
households’
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households
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Change preposition
with income
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income
Fix the agreement mistake
incomes
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of more than $100,000. It was the most growth in 12 years, adding 5 million households.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, groups with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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