The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
The diagram illustrates how
electricity
is produced in electric
power station.
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an electric
the electric
Overall
, this
diagram has 7 main steps to produce electricity
starting from the river and finishing in
the national grid.
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with
To begin
with, the stream of water
comes to a high level of reservoir and layer on the dam,which controls water
. The next step is
the water
going by intake,which opens during the day,and flowing the water
to generate the electricity
,however
at Add a comma
however,
night
the Add a comma
night,
water
is pumping. Later, a stream of water
goes to the power station,where generators provide electricity
to the national grid by using power lines. At that stage,this
operation has particularly the same rules,where reversible turbines in the day operate generator
,but Add an article
a generator
the generator
in
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at
the
night Correct article usage
apply
water
is pumping and further
going to high-level reservoirs.Submitted by batirka06 on
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