The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999.

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the proportion of households with five technologies in the U.S. between 1995 and 1999.

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of households

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increased in all technology sections across

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5 years. A key trend is that washing

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machines

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,

computer

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computers

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and

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have gradually risen each year. At the same time, the

phone

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player has

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. Turning to the data in more detail, in 1995, washing

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machines

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,

computer

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computers

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and

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the Internet

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have shown

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similar

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at approximately 60%, 40%, and 10% respectively.

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grown about 5 times than other aspects

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1999.

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and DVD

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started at around 18% and 35% respectively.

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has

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exceeded

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player and computer in 1996 and

in

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1999 respectively,

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has extremely increased over the 4 years and hit a high of percentage

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75%.