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The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999.

The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999.
#percentage #households #kinds #technology
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 the proportion of households with five technologies in the U.S. between 1995 and 1999.
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,
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amount
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 of households
have
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 increased in all technology sections across
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5 years. A key trend is that washing
machine
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machines
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,
computer
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computers
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 and
Internet
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the Internet
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 have gradually risen each year. At the same time, the
phone
 has
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desended
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descended
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 and
DVD
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 player has
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been transfrormed
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transfrormed
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transformed
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propotion
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proportion
promotion
. Turning to the data in more detail, in 1995, washing
machine
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machines
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,
computer
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computers
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 and
Internet
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the Internet
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have shown
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 similar
trend
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trends
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 at approximately 60%, 40%, and 10% respectively.
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grown about 5 times than other aspects
untill
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until
 1999.
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, in 1995,
phone
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phones
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 and DVD
player
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players
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have
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started at around 18% and 35% respectively.
However
,
phone
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has
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exceeded
DVD
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 player and computer in 1996 and
in
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1999 respectively,
phone
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the phone
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 has extremely increased over the 4 years and hit a high of percentage
at
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75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words phone with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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