Write a letter to a travel agent expressing your dissatisfaction with their facilities due to a problem you had on a holiday.
Dear Sir,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing this
letter to address a pressing concern that has arisen regarding the trip for
Dubai that I booked for my holiday from your company.The date of booking was 20th Change preposition
to
july
2024 and the booking reference number was D3200-01.
Change the capitalization
July
Firstly
, We went to the hotel that was booked as per itineary
but we did not get Correct your spelling
itinerary
same
room that you showed me during booking and Correct article usage
the same
room
is too small.Correct article usage
the room
Thus
it is
Wrong verb form
was
diffcult
to manage as I went with my wife and our 2 kids.Correct your spelling
difficult
Furthermore
we did not Add a comma
Furthermore,
recieve
complimentary breakfast as per our travel plan.Correct your spelling
receive
Due to
that reason
we had to go outside to find breakfast and it was very difficult to find vegetarian food in Add a comma
reason,
Middle
East.
In the light of foregoing, our taxi for Correct article usage
the Middle
city
tour was Correct article usage
the city
that
we discussed. During trip Correct word choice
what
booking
we asked for Add a comma
booking,
SUV
to carry our luggage with us, but we received Correct article usage
an SUV
sedan
and it was difficult to go for a city tour in that.Correct article usage
a sedan
Due to
above mentioned
problems we did not enjoy a lot from the service that you provided to us. I hope you took Add a hyphen
above-mentioned
this
matter seriously and gave us the compensation accordingly
.
Thank you so much for consideration
. I hope to hear from you regarding Correct pronoun usage
your consideration
this
matter as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Avi bhadiyadraSubmitted by avibhadiyadra on
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Task Achievement
Try to provide a brief introduction of your issue at the beginning to engage the reader and state your purpose clearly.
Coherence & Cohesion
Consider using a wider variety of sentence structures and vocabulary to enhance your expression and make your letter more engaging.
Task Achievement
Including specific details about how the issues affected your holiday could make your complaint more compelling and justified.
Writing Tone
You've maintained a generally appropriate formal tone throughout the letter, which is suitable for the context.
Logical Structure
Your letter has a clear structure, with distinct paragraphs for each issue, making it easy to follow.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite