Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impact of it on the environment and on people who lost their jobs because of it.

Online shopping is becoming an uprising trend in all parts of the world.

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would worsen the current

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pollution and the lack of

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used for transportation

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contribute to the rate of unemployment. Perhaps the most

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contributory factor to the environment is that the

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would be more polluted. It must be understood that most of the developing countries, especially in South East Asia, use motorbikes as the main vehicles for various purposes. For that reason, when online shopping becomes well-known nationally, a great number of goods

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will ride motorbikes, which release toxic gases into the

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, to do their jobs,

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resulting in

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pollution or making it even worse. Take Vietnam as an example, where the reason why it was one of the most

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-polluted nations in 2022 was the wide use of motorbikes. Another factor affecting the environment is that

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would cause the concern of lacking

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for transportation worldwide.

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the developed countries have

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discovered natural resources

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applied them in using energy for cars or replacing traditional cars with

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electrical ones, the developing are currently still

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fuels

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. Unless there is an innovative breakthrough to make a plan of finding natural resources, they will continue using the old

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. Soon, the amount of those will decrease, creating another major concern unexpectedly. In

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the writer’s perspective that the rate of unemployed people would increase. As online shopping integrates into life, going out

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shopping would gradually become unnecessary.

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will lead to shop assistants lacking work to do In reality

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customers are able to have a particular product’s full

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in

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a shopping website.

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the fact that they might not be able to find alternative jobs in

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time, a high number of people,

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, would suffer from unemployment. In conclusion, the

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potential impacts of worsening

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pollution and lacking traditional

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for vehicles are contributory factors worth consideration.

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, people increasingly losing their jobs, especially as shop assistants, would be a burden for the government worldwide to solve as soon as possible.