the bar chart below shows the percentage of australian men and women in the different age group who did regular physical activity in 2010. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the

percentage

of Australians pursuing physical activity, in 2010, in different

age

group

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and different genders. It illustrates that

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the rate of active women was almost constant,

men

had variable involvement in regular exercise. Between the

age

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of 35 to 64, there

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almost

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constant

percentage

of 53%

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active

female

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females

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.

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, these numbers varied between 39.5% to 52.8% in the

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population, with the least in the

age

group 35-44 and the highest rate in the

age

between 15 to 24. In all

age

groups, the

percentage

of

female

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females

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pursuing physical activity

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more than

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, except

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age

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between 15 to 24.

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, these

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were almost the same after the

age

of 65.

Overall

,

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bar chart demonstrated the involvement of Australian women and

men

, in 2010, in different

age

group

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groups

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. It shows that

although

women were more active after the

age

of 24,

men

caught up

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rate after the

age

of 65.