The chart shows the main methods of transportation for people traveling to a university for work or study in 2004 and 2009
The pie charts illustrate five different ways of transporting that people
use
for Wrong verb form
used
traveling
to university in the UK in 2004 and 2009. Change the spelling
travelling
It is clear that
the popularity of public modes had an upward trend although
, own vehicles showed a downward trend.
In terms of Buses, it showed a considerable increase from 33% in 2004 to 46% in 2009 moreover
, Cars
sector contained over Correct article usage
the Cars
half
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a half
the half
portion
of Correct article usage
a portion
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the traveling
traveling
for people in 2004 Change the spelling
travelling
however
, it decreased tremendously to 28% in 2009. According
the statistics ,Bicycle fame climbed moderately from 9% in 2004 to 16% in 2009.
Both Add the preposition
According to
number
of Train passengers and Walkers experienced Correct article usage
the number
a
minimal growth between these years. In 2004 Trains and walkers Correct article usage
apply
include
3% and 4% of transporting respectively Wrong verb form
included
then
rose by 1% and 2% in 2009 sequentially.Submitted by bakhti on
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