You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter •Say which points in the article you agree with •Explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres •Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article Write at least 150 words.

Dear sir, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter to discuss
about
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the article that you wrote two days before in a global newspaper regarding the appearance of
a
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town
centres in India
looks
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looking
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same
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the same
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as each other. I
am partially agree
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to
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the statement that you wrote as it looks similar from
exterior
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the exterior
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not from
inside
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the inside
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.
To begin
with, our
town
centre consists
numbers
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number
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of different
sub zones
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to enjoy with your loved
once
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. To describe it more, It
consist
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gym
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,
swiming
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swimming
pool classes and cultural dance classes.
Furthermore
, they
also
conduct cultural events to promote local
lifestyle
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. It always helps
to
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young children to learn more about their culture. Earlier,
city
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also
conduct
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various surveys for
improvement
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the improvement
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of
town
centres. I guess these above-mentioned
point
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make a point of difference
compares
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to other
town
centres. I would love to invite you for
townhouse
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a townhouse
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tour and I will give you the tour and some inside details of our townhouses. Thank you for your consideration. I eagerly
wait
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for
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your prompt response. Yours Sincerely, Avi bhadiyadra
Submitted by avibhadiyadra on

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coherence
Your letter is clearly structured with good paragraphing, making it easy to follow your points. For an even stronger impact, try linking your ideas more smoothly with a variety of transition words.
task achievement
You have addressed all components of the task effectively, demonstrating a clear position throughout the letter. To enhance your response, consider expanding on each point with more specific examples and details.
tone
You have successfully adopted a suitable writing tone for a letter to the editor, which is formal yet engaging.
structure
Your introduction and conclusion are well executed, effectively setting the tone and summarizing your points.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • homogeneous
  • distinctive
  • cultural heritage
  • architectural marvels
  • locally owned enterprises
  • geographical uniqueness
  • community spirit
  • historical landmarks
  • cuisine diversity
  • dialect nuances
  • heritage preservation
  • tourist attractions
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