The graph below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The following illustrations depict the percentages of
films
released and cinema ticket sales in a
ceratin
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certain
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country, in 1996 and 2006. The genres of
films
are
drama
,
comedy
,
fantasy
and
romance
.
Overall
, we can observe that the majority of
people
liked
comedy
films
more in both years,
however
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the highest number of
films
produced was
drama
.
On the other hand
, the least popular
genre
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genres
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of
musi
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music
in 1996 and 2006
was
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were
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fantasy
and
romance
, respectively.
According to
the first bar graph, in 1996,
the
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quarter of
films
produced was
drama
, 20% of produced movies
was
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were
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comedy
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comedies
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, approximately 15% of
films
was
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were
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fantasy
and the least popular kind of
films
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film
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was
romance
. In 2006, the production of all kinds of movies
has
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slightly increased except
of
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for
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romance
.The production of
drama
films
have
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has
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increased by 10% and made up 35% of all produced movies. 25% of
films
was
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were
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comedy
, and 15% of
films
was
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were
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fantasy
.
Although
, the number of
romance
films
stayed the same. Around 15% of sold
tickets
were
drama
,
this
number
has
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slightly increased in 2006 and made up around 13% of
films
. 20% of sold
tickets
were in
genre
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the genre
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of
comedy
, in 1996. There were
any
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no
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substantial differences in
this
genre
, too just a slight increase. The least popular kind of movie in 1996 was
fantasy
which made up less
that
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than
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5% of sold
tickets
, unlike
to
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in
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2006
where
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when
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more than 5% of
tickets
were
fantasy
.
Romance
was the least popular kind of movie among
people
, around 3% of
people
bought
tickets
for
this
genre
. And 5% of
people
bought
tickets
of
this
genre
, in 1996.
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