The graph below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The following illustrations depict the percentages of
films
released and cinema ticket sales in a ceratin
country, in 1996 and 2006. The genres of Correct your spelling
certain
films
are drama
, comedy
, fantasy
and romance
.
Overall
, we can observe that the majority of people
liked comedy
films
more in both years, however
the highest number of Add a comma
however,
films
produced was drama
. On the other hand
, the least popular genre
of Fix the agreement mistake
genres
musi
in 1996 and 2006 Correct your spelling
music
was
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were
fantasy
and romance
, respectively.
According to
the first bar graph, in 1996, the
quarter of Correct article usage
a
films
produced was drama
, 20% of produced movies was
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were
comedy
, approximately 15% of Fix the agreement mistake
comedies
films
was
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were
fantasy
and the least popular kind of films
was Fix the agreement mistake
film
romance
. In 2006, the production of all kinds of movies has
slightly increased except Unnecessary verb
apply
of
Change preposition
for
romance
.The production of drama
films
have
increased by 10% and made up 35% of all produced movies. 25% of Correct subject-verb agreement
has
films
was
Change the verb form
were
comedy
, and 15% of films
was
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were
fantasy
. Although
, the number of romance
films
stayed the same.
Around 15% of sold tickets
were drama
, this
number has
slightly increased in 2006 and made up around 13% of Unnecessary verb
apply
films
. 20% of sold tickets
were in genre
of Add an article
the genre
comedy
, in 1996. There were any
substantial differences in Correct determiner usage
no
this
genre
, too just a slight increase. The least popular kind of movie in 1996 was fantasy
which made up less that
5% of sold Correct word choice
than
tickets
, unlike to
2006 Change preposition
in
where
more than 5% of Correct word choice
when
tickets
were fantasy
. Romance
was the least popular kind of movie among people
, around 3% of people
bought tickets
for this
genre
. And 5% of people
bought tickets
of this
genre
, in 1996.Submitted by intiqam.hasanov on
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