The chart below shows the percentage of people born in and outside of Australia living in cities , and towns, and Ural areas in 1950 and 2010. Summurise the information by selecting and reporting the main features of the graph and make comparison where relevant.
The bar graphs give information about the
amount
of born people throughout Change the quantifier
number
Australia
from 1950 to 2010.
Overall
, it is clear that
the percentage of being born in the cities
of Australia
showed similar
rising trend in both given Add an article
a similar
period
, Fix the agreement mistake
periods
while
2010 witnessed the smallest.
In 1950, More babies were born in all selected places, namely, cities
, towns and rural places of Australia
than 2010
. That of Change preposition
in 2010
cities
inside of Australia
was about at 50% in 1950 and other figures: towns and the countries had 20% and nearly 30%respectively
, Correct your spelling
30 %respectively
while
that year more people had babies outside of that. the year 2010 was dominant
year for the trend of being born in Add an article
a dominant
cities
of the country's
inside and outside, Change noun form
country
however
, there was a decrease in born
schedule in towns and Add an article
the born
a born
suburbans
.Correct your spelling
suburbs
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