Nowadays shopping has become an amusement activity and gained popularity among
people
of all ages. It has been transformed into a pleasure and recreation pursuit for many individuals.
The growing enticement of shopping, in spare time, track down to the increasing influence of social media activities and advertisements.
the transformation of social culture
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into the
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era has
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people
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more time and money
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relaxation. Predominantly the impact of media portraying the luxury
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and modern
things
on television, films, theater etc. has a great impact on an individual’s life.
In addition
, a rapid incur of large, fancy shopping malls with lavish brands, exciting opportunities
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recreational activity and
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of different
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, all under one roof, fascinate
people
to spend their time over there.
People
get
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forChange preposition
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lavish
things
and feel pleasure
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such
items. For many individuals, it gives a sense of accomplishment to them. It’s an entertainment
as well as
relaxation for them.
There is
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impact of shopping on
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as well as
in general. Many times
people
continue to shop
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beyond their
necessityFix the agreement mistake
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for the same.
This
may have economic consequences for them as spending more money than their capacity
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social and economic
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on them.
On the other hand
, an
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consumption of products leads to
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productivity,
hence
it increases the marketing competition among the
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might create new job opportunities and new varieties of items in the market.
In conclusion, shopping as a leisure activity has many good effects as it
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relaxation and entertainment but
on the other hand
, we should not ignore the impacts of overbuying
things
that may lead to mental stress and financial burden.