Two pie charts show a comparison of the proportion of people with different degrees and professions who worked in an engineering company in 1980 and 2008

Two pie charts show a comparison of the proportion of people with different degrees and professions who worked in an engineering company in 1980 and 2008
The charts illustrate the
number
of employees who worked in an engineering company with different types of higher education certificates in 1980 and 2008.
Overall
, as can be seen in the two pie charts the
number
of workers with
PHD
certificates in different fields has grown over the
last
28 years ago
while
this
proportion for
people
with
master
's degrees was the same as it was. On the one hand, in 1980,
people
with a
degree
in
master
of
science
and colleagues who had only bachelor's degrees in art and
science
had the biggest shares in
this
company, about 73% in total. In 2008, the proportion of
people
who had a university
degree
in
Master
of
Science
, 29%, was still the same as in 1980
while
the first
degree
in
science
and arts faced a dramatic decrease in 2008, 9% and 14% respectively.
On the other hand
,
people
in 1980 did not tend to have
PHD
certificates and individuals with a
degree
in
PHD
of
science
and art had the lowest portions in the company
as well as
people
with
Master
of Art degrees.
However
, in 2008, the
number
of employees with
PhD
in
science
experienced a drastic 17% rise from 13% up to 30%.
Also
, the
number
of
people
with an arts
phd
had tripled and reached 7% in 2008
in addition
to a minor increase in
people
with a
master
of arts, about 1%.
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