The graph and bar chart below show the avarage monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Afican

The graph and bar chart below show the avarage monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Afican
The given mixed chart illustrates the approximate
rainfall
and
temperature
of the region that belongs to East Africa per month for twelve months of a year. At first glance, it could be observed that the line depicts the
temperature
while
the
rainfall
is demonstrated by the bars. The graph and statistics have revealed the relevant relationship between the
temperature
and
rainfall
throughout the year. First of all, it is noticeable that in the middle of the year, particularly from June to August, either the
temperature
or the
rainfall
hit their lowest figures. In detail, both of these statistics reach the lowest point in July, just approximately 20 Celsius
Degree
and under 10
rainfall
millimetres
. In these three months, the
degree
is not over 21,5 and the
rainfall
just fluctuates from 5-10
millimetres
.
In contrast
, from March to May, approximate
rainfall
and
degree
reach the peak points. In March, the figure experienced the highest
degree
at 24 C.D. with roughly 100
rainfall
millimetres
. In the next month, the
rainfall
reaches the peak number which is tripled the previous month with a slightly lower
temperature
, approximately 23,8 Celsius
degree
.
It is clear that
there is a link between the changes in
temperature
and
rainfall
.
However
, we can not claim that they have a causation relationship because in February or September,
while
the
degree
is quite high, the
millimetres
are still really low.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words rainfall, temperature, degree, millimetres with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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