Teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage students . Do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

It is true that every

teenagers

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will gain benefits when doing a global student exchange.

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essay will discuss the

disadvantage

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of being an

exchanged

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student in other

countriees

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countries

, which

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eclipsed by the

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of

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. Opponents disagree with

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view for several reasons. Chief among these is that

students

face culture shock when they study in a new country.

For

this

reason, they are not

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familiar

with the communication and lifestyle of the nation yet.

For example

, when Vietnamese

students

go to Korea, they will have to get more time to develop themselves into how Korean learners or citizens communicate with each other when it comes to body language or

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. Another possible reason is they might be homesick.

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, since

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is the initial time they come to Australia or USA

for studying

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abroad, they possibly miss their family a lot.

As a result

of

this

, it requires them to get more friends so that they will not be depressed.

However

, I firmly advocate that there are several advantages for many young learners to study

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exchange

exchanges

in other nations.

Firstly

, these countries cause them to be more independent.

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mean

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that they can live by themselves without relying on their parents.

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can be seen in Vietnamese

students

that when they live in an apartment alone, they can do house chores by themselves like cleaning

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house, doing laundry and washing dishes.

Secondly

, travelling internationally for studying

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purpose

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can contribute to improving socializing.

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of

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reason is they may meet new schoolmates or classmates from different countries with

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diverse

backgrounds. Sydney in Australia,

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, socializing with other internationals will aid young generations to be more and more confident in communication. In conclusion,

while

opponents might be against

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this

fact, I still strongly believe that teenage

students

will be more advantageous because of an exchange program, regarding to social and life

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aspect.