The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature,and make comparisions where relevent.

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The graph illustrates the cycle of recycling products from plastic bottles.

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it is clear that

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there are nine stages of the process which begins with littering and ends with finished products.

To begin

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with, the plastic waste

such

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as bottles is thrown into bins around cities will be collected by recycled trucks. Afterwards, the trucks will deliver the waste to a recycling centre for sorting by

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and separating renewable and non-renewable waste. Recycling ones will be compressed into blocks by a compressing machine before moving to grind in the next process. Two-wheeled grinding machines will crush those blocks from the previous stage and the residue from crushing falls into the water to clean and wash. Cleaned residue will be pulled out of the water and

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poured into the pallets producing engine

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heating them with high temperatures to form a new raw material. The stacks of

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new raw

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materials

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are ready to be used to produce a variety of products to sell on the shelves before getting used by buyers and the cycle will repeat all over again.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

184 words

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