The graph below shows the changing patterns of access to modern technology in home in the UK ( expressed in percentage terms).
The graph illustrates the difference in
design
of access to new technology in homes in the United Kingdom.
In general, what stands out from the graph is that four technologies improved between years in the UK and steadily became popular in the UK.
Looking at the details, the CD player was above 40 per Add an article
the design
cent
in 1994/5 then
steadily grew from 1994/5 to 2002/03 and levelled off between 2002/03 and 2008 to 80 per cent
. By contrast
, the Mobile phone started to climb in 1996/97 under 20 per cent
. After that, Mobile phone
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rose
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to under
cent
and stayed under 80 per cent
in 2008.
Focusing on DVD player and Internet connection, the former started to change after 2000/01 under almost 30 per cent
. Next,
the DVD player considerably inclined almost 80 per cent
and then
slightly climbed above 80 per cent
. On the other hand
, the latter significantly increased from 1998/9 to 2002/03 then
gradually improved above 60 per cent
in 2008.Submitted by TUTOO on
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