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The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan

The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
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The chart shows information about the number of social websites that were used by Canadians in 2014 and 2015. The information is measured in percentages.
Overall
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, there was an upward and downward trend of percentages in the
period
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. It is interesting to note that in both periods, the highest percentage was at one site and the lowest was at five
sites
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. Looking at the first
period
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, in 2014, the no-
sites
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 reached 22 per cent, and one site had almost 40%.
Two
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sites
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 reached almost a quarter (23%), and three
sites
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 had a half of the
two
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sites
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 proportion.
Additionally
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, the four
sites
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 and five
sites
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 are just under 10% (5% and 2%, respectively). Turning to the end of the
period
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, in 2015, the no-site had a slight decrease from the previous
period
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 (21%), and one site had almost 30%.
Two
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sites
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 reached almost a quarter,
while
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 three
sites
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 had 16 per cent. In the
last
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two
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sites
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, the four
sites
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 still reached under a tenth, at 8%, and five
sites
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 half of it.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, sites, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparative data
  • Utilization
  • Consecutive years
  • Overall trends
  • Proportion
  • Notable changes
  • Consistencies
  • Diversification
  • Summarize
  • Reflecting
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