Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas whereas others think that change is inevitable and that banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

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world, the

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in transportation allows people to travel

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lower

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cost, and

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encourages tourism. As tourists

increases

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, local cultures

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to fade away through time, and even disappear. Some

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to ban

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tourists to preserve these cultural

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some

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tourism since the change is unavoidable. In my point of view, I agree with prohibitions on visitors, and my opinion will be elaborated with examples below.

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, the main benefit

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traveling

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is widen

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one’s view. Exploring the world helps with self-understanding and self-reflection, which contributes to a huge part of our

self identity

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. Visiting historical sites allow us to be humble

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getting

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nature can cultivate our empathy and compassion.

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, there is nothing

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with

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no

costs

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case, cultural relics and

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nature

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been impacted

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the first place. Environmental issues result from the excessive amount of visitors.

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, emissions created by

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are growing drastically every year

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and

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cause

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negative impacts on the greenhouse effect.

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, tourism

are

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accelerating the damages in historical areas

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as an over amount of CO2 can lead to irreparable

destructions

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to art pieces and

architectures

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, though

traveling

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travelling

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can expand our view, and inspires us to grow,

yet

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the costs behind are too expensive. It is suggested to enforce stronger laws and diminish the impacts to the lowest from now.