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The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The below diagram represents the University
sports
court
 in the year 1990 and
current
Correct article usage
the current
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 year.
To begin
 with, in 1990, the University
sports
court
 had been provided with adequate parking spaces,
outdoor
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an outdoor
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 pool, and
tennis
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a tennis
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court
 with common changing rooms. The cafe and reception had a pleasant view of the park with adequate space for circulation and recreation as well. In the current plan, the number of tennis courts
are
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is
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 increased with the addition of facilities which
includes
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include
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 fitness centres and
basketball
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a basketball
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court
. The park is replaced by
basketball
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a basketball
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court
 showing an unpleasant view
for
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of
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 the cafe and reception area.
Furthermore
, the outdoor pool in 1990
is
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was
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 replaced with
indoor
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an indoor
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 pool and
providing
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provided
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changing
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a changing
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 room as the common space for easier access.
Overall
, the
Universities
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university
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sports
court
 in 1990 showed better circulation, focal points, and parking facilities as well. The current plan is executed with more facilities and increasing the footprint of the
sports
court
.
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