The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010
The given map illustrates the village developments in
Stockefort
in the years 1930 and 2010.
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Stockport
Overall
, in 1930 the town was filled with greenery and recreational spaces providing an adequate open environment for the user. The total number of houses
has increased in 2010 when compared to 1930, majority
of the buildings like the garden, and the primary school have been renovated and replaced with other buildings respectively.
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the majority
Firstly
, the farmland have been relocated near the bridge and replaced with the houses
in the year 2010. Additionally
, new roads have been constructed which connect all the houses
together and forms
intersectional meeting points as well. Correct subject-verb agreement
form
Moreover
, the gardens have been reestablished into the
retirement homes with the construction of new Correct article usage
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houses
, arranged in a square-shaped form. However
, the river stroke and the location of the bridge remain the same throughout the period. Furthermore
, the post office remained constant and nearby shops were substituted with the houses
by the year 2010.Submitted by divyasp0803 on
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