The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010

The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010
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The given map illustrates the village developments in
Stockefort
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Stockport
in the years 1930 and 2010.
Overall
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, in 1930 the town was filled with greenery and recreational spaces providing an adequate open environment for the user. The total number of
houses
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has increased in 2010 when compared to 1930,
majority
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the majority
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of the buildings like the garden, and the primary school have been renovated and replaced with other buildings respectively.
Firstly
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, the farmland have been relocated near the bridge and replaced with the
houses
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in the year 2010.
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, new roads have been constructed which connect all the
houses
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together and
forms
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intersectional meeting points as well.
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, the gardens have been reestablished into
the
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retirement homes with the construction of new
houses
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, arranged in a square-shaped form.
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, the river stroke and the location of the bridge remain the same throughout the period.
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, the post office remained constant and nearby shops were substituted with the
houses
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by the year 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • infrastructure
  • facilities
  • landscape
  • sparse population
  • residential areas
  • commercial zones
  • recreational facilities
  • agricultural lands
  • local economy
  • transportation infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • public amenities
  • green spaces
  • quality of life
  • historical buildings
  • landmarks
  • preservation
  • urban development
  • environmental impacts
  • natural landscapes
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