The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
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The pie charts illustrate
energy
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consumption in a typical Australian household and the proportion of greenhouse gas
emissions
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caused by
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energy
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use.
Overall
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, the largest share of household
energy
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in Australia is consumed for heating purposes. Meanwhile, water heating is the primary driver of greenhouse gas
emissions
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in
this
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region. In terms of
energy
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consumption, heating accounts for the largest proportion of 42%. Following behind is water heating, comprising just under a third. Other appliances use 15%,
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the remaining 13% of
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is used for refrigeration, lighting and cooling, constituting 7%, 4%, and 2%, respectively. Regarding greenhouse gas
emissions
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, water heating is the highest contributor, emitting just over a third of the total. Other appliances follow closely at 28%. The
emissions
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resulting from refrigeration and heating have almost the same proportion at about 15% each,
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lighting makes up only 8% and cooling emits a relatively low percentage of 3%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, emissions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Sustainable practices
  • Energy efficiency
  • Renewable energy
  • Fossil fuels
  • Carbon footprint
  • Eco-friendly appliances
  • Insulation
  • Solar panels
  • Recycling
  • Climate change
  • Kilowatt-hour (kWh)
  • Emissions-intensive
  • Energy audit
  • Smart meters
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