Topic: The bar chart shows the percentage of people in the United Kingdom per age group without any qualifications.
The given bar chart illustrates the comparison of different
age
groups of people in one country who didn't have any qualifications in 2009. Overall
, the highest percentage of males and females without any qualification belonged to the oldest age
group, while
the youngest generation of all sexes accounted for the lowest figures.
According to
the bar chart, the figures for women
who didn't have any qualifications were the highest for ages from
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49-years-old
and 50-59/Correct your spelling
49 years old
64-years-old
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64 years old
around
11% and 20%. respectively. Change preposition
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While
the percentage of men was lower than women
and witnessed about 10% and 17% for the same age
categories. The only two age
groups that showed the same number of women
and men without qualification were from 25-29 and 30-39 years old about 8%. From 20-24 years the figures for males remained the same approximately 8%, while
women
revealed 7%.
In contrast
, among the youngest group of people from 17-19 years, more men rather than women
were without qualifications and the percentage was 7% and 6%, respectively.Submitted by lobacheva.design on
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