The chart belows gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018

The chart belows gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018
The bar chart provides key information about the weekly expenditure for families in one region between 1968 to 2018.  
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the highest spending for families was on food.
In addition
, in 1968 they spent almost on goods than in 2018,
whereas
in 2018 they spent wan on leisure. 
According to
what is shown, in 1968 food expenditure had a significant increase at the peak of 35%, families spent on clothing and footwear around 10 per
cent
,
while
they showed a decline on spent on housing by approximately 10
cent
. transport and leisure showed a similar decrease of nearly 9 per
cent
.  In terms of, family expenditure in 2018, leisure was the most significant part over the period at the top of 23 per
cent
,
while
food showed an insignificant decrease to half compared to 1968.
While
transport showed a higher ratio than in 1968 almost 15 per
cent
.
However
, household goods were equivalent
overall
the period, other goods had almost the same percentages about 5 per
cent
.
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