Some people believe if a police force carries guns, it will encourage the level of violence in the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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violence in

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society

will be promoted if a

police

force carries

guns

,

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since the advantages of carrying

guns

are more than the

disavantages

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disadvantages

. For the pros of a

police

holds

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holding

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guns

, the safety of the

society

will be increased and ensured, decreasing the violent

crimes

in the

society

. The

present

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presence

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of

guns

will strengthen the power of the

police

, which can prevent

crimes

effectively as people might

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be afriad

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afriad

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afraid

of being

hurted

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hurt

hunted

by

guns

if they

committe

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commit

vital

crimes

.

Moreover

, if there are

crimes

that jeopardise the lives of the

residences

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residents

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,

such

as robbing and

gun

shooting, the

police

can utilize the

guns

to shoot the

criminer

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criminals

in order to stop the

crimes

and

protected

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protect

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the lives of the citizens. As time

passed

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passes

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, the criminal rate might

declined

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decline

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as the power of the

police

is ensured and strong.

On the other hand

, there are drawbacks

on

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police

carrying

guns

. If both

of

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the

police

and the

crimnier

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criminal

have

guns

, a

gun

war may be sparked. Innocent citizens who are in the area of the

gun

war may be shot and get

injuriy

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injured

under

this

chaotic

situations

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situation

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, increasing the violence in the

soicety

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society

. If the

police

has

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no

guns

, the

police

can use their professional strategies to catch the

crimners

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criminals

as

usaul

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usual

, preventing a

gun

war. Yet, is it

guarenteed

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guaranteed

that the

police

without

guns

can defeat the

criminers

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criminals

with

guns

effectively?

Guns

is

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a very strong

weapon

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weapons

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which

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and

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human ability is not enough to fight

with

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it

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them

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.

Police

without powerful weapons

makes them

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the same

with

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as

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usual

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normal

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people. They may easily

hurted

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be hurt

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by the

crinmers

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crimes

with

guns

and the same

go

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goes

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with the

vulunerable

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vulnerable

citizens.

This

will only encourage the

crinmers

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crimpers

to use violent and strong ways to

committe

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commit

crimes

as the strength of the

police

is easily defeated. In conclusion, I believe that

police

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the police

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, an occupation that

protect

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protects

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the

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lives and

ensure

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ensures

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the safety of

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society

should be given certain power. With professional training on the skills and the

enthics

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ethics

ethnics

on

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of

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using

guns

on duty,

police

with

guns

will encourage the calmness and safety of the

soicety

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society

,

instead

of

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violence.