The charts above show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the information shown.

The charts above show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.

Write a report of at least 150 words describing the information shown.
The Bar chart depicted below illustrates the
number
of
Japanese
who went abroad for travel from 1985 to 1995,
while
the line chart demonstrates Australia's share of these people during
this
period. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is evident that travelling overseas between
Japanese
has become more popular over time. At the same time,
Japanese
passengers who chose Australia as their destination grew too. Looking at the bar chart, there were only 4.5
million
people planning to travel abroad, in 1985, and
this
number
grew steadily to 11
million
in 1990. After a negligible drop in 1991, the
number
increased again to 12
million
and became stable for about 2 years. Eventually, it grew sharply to 15
million
,in 1995. Turn to the line graph, the share of
Japanese
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tourist market
for
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Australia was around zero before 1985.
This
number
started to increase in 1985, with 2 percent.
This
growth continued to about 5% in 1988. After that, there was a decrease to 4%, and it was followed by an increase from 1989 to 1993, with about 6.2%. After a year, it faced
with
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a negligible decrease in 1994.
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