The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
This
line graph illustrates the number
of foreign visitors
to three different areas in a European country from 1987 to 2007. Overall
, the coast attracted the highest number
of tourists initially
, followed by the mountains, and then
the lakes. After 20 years, the coast still topped the list, but the lakes surpassed the mountains, which came in last
.
In addition
, the number
of visitors
to the coast increased significantly from 40 to 75 during this
period. The number
of mountains increased from 20 to 35 between 1987 and 2007. The number
of lakes also
grew from 10 to 50 in 20 years.
Furthermore
, it is worth noting that the number
of coasts reached its lowest point at 35 in 1992 before it began to increase. It is evident that the number
of visitors
to the lake peaked at 75 in 2002 before decreasing to 50. The number
of visitors
to the lake saw the greatest increase in the graph from 10 to 50 during this
period.Submitted by m0751102 on
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