The graph below shows the fertility rate of women in different Gulf Countries from 1990 to 2000. Write a report describing the information in the graph below.

The graph below shows the fertility rate of women in different Gulf Countries from 1990 to 2000.

Write a report describing the information in the graph below.
The bar chart illustrates shifts in the fertility
rates
of females in six different Gulf countries, namely Bahrain, Kuwait, Qatar, Oman, S. Arabia and UAE between 1990 and 2000.
Overall
, several trends are apparent here.
Firstly
, there were emerging falls in the
birth
rates
in all these countries over the period.
Secondly
, despite these drops, Oman and S. Arabia remained populous with the highest fertility
rates
.
To begin
with, standing at the peak of 7
births
per woman, Oman witnessed a bit sudden decrease of around 2.5 by 2000.
Similarly
, the figure for S. Arabia had a following decline from nearly 7 to roughly 2.5
births
per woman. Compared to other nations, Qatar and UAE had the same number of
births
in 1990, with about 4
births
per female;
however
, by the year 2000, the
birth
rate in UAE had quickly slumped faster than that in Qatar. Like the nations mentioned above, the vicinity of 3.5 represented the
birth
rates
in both Bahrain and Kuwait. Until 2000, women in Kuwait had given
birth
to more children than those in Bahrain, representing around 3.8
births
.
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  • fertility rate
  • trend
  • significant increase
  • significant decrease
  • Gulf countries
  • data
  • analyze
  • compare
  • overall
  • individual country
  • highlight
  • predict
  • period
  • rate changes
  • decline
  • rise
  • fluctuate
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