The chart below shows the umber of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart states
that
numbers of Correct determiner usage
the
households
annual income in the Change noun form
households'
household's
year
Fix the agreement mistake
years
of
2007, 2011 and 2015. Change preposition
apply
This
is devided
into 5 different Correct your spelling
divided
catergories
based on annual income from less than 25,000 Correct your spelling
categories
USD
to 100,000 USD
or more. Overall
, there are
growth in Change the verb form
is
majority
of Add an article
the majority
a majority
housesholds
, where some stay the same
Most Correct your spelling
households
family
annual Change noun form
family'
income
between 50,000 Fix the agreement mistake
incomes
USD
to 99,999 USD
stayed roughly the same during these years, which
Correct word choice
and which
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
household
Fix the agreement mistake
households
are
between 15 Correct subject-verb agreement
is
millions
to 20 Change to singular
million
millions
. Change to singular
million
On the other hand
, household
making 100,000 Fix the agreement mistake
households
USD
which majority of households are between the number of 30 millions
Change to singular
million
Introudcution
bar chart 5 different categories
Correct your spelling
Introduction
millions
household
task response
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