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The chart below shows the umber of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the umber of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart states
that
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the
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 numbers of
households
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households'
household's
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 annual income in the
year
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years
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of
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apply
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2007, 2011 and 2015.
This
 is
devided
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divided
 into 5 different
catergories
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categories
 based on annual income from less than 25,000
USD
 to 100,000
USD
 or more.
Overall
, there
are
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is
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 growth in
majority
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the majority
a majority
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 of
housesholds
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households
, where some stay the same Most
family
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family'
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 annual
income
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incomes
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 between 50,000
USD
 to 99,999
USD
 stayed roughly the same during these years,
which
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and which
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numbers
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number
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 of
household
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households
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are
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is
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 between 15
millions
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million
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 to 20
millions
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million
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.
On the other hand
,
household
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households
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 making 100,000
USD
 which majority of households are between the number of 30
millions
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million
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Introudcution
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Introduction
 bar chart 5 different categories
millions
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words usd, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the seventh paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the eighth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the ninth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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