The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer identifying the main trends and making comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from

1949-2008.

Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer identifying the main trends

and making comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart shows
total
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the total
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amount of four types
renewable
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of renewable
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energy
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(Hydroelectric power,
wood
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,
biofuels
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and
wind
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) in
USA
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the USA
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from 1949 to 2008. The data was presented in
quadrillion
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Btu
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.
Overall
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total
energy
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from all sources increase more than twice from 1950 to 2000. The highest consumable
energy
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is hydroelectric power , followed by
wood
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and
biofuels
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. The
wind
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is the least renewable source that used since 1980.
Hydroelectronic
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Hydroelectric
power and
wood
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are the highest consumable
energy
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source
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sources
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in the USA
compare
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compared
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with
biofuels
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and
wind
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. At the beginning of 1950,
total
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the total
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consumption of
the
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apply
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hydroelectric was slightly below
the
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that
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wood
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of wood
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. But in 1960, there was a significant increase
of
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in
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the
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hydroelectric consumption from 1.7 to 2.7
quadrillion
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Btu
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,
while
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the
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apply
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wood
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experienced
decrease
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a decrease
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slighly
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slightly
from 1.8 to 1.5
quadrillion
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Btu
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. Consumption of
biofuels
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and
wind
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started
from
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in
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1980 with a small amount below 1
quadrillion
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Btu
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. In the early
2000
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2000s
,
the
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apply
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biofuels
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showed a drastic
grow
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growth
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with total
energy
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almost
reach
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reaching
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1.8
quadrillion
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Btu
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. Opposite to the
biofules
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biofuels
, the
wind
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only showed a little increase with total
energy
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around 1
quadrillion
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Btu
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, wood, biofuels, wind, quadrillion, btu with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption trend
  • renewable energy
  • stagnant level
  • increase in consumption
  • energy policy
  • technological advancements
  • fluctuations
  • public and governmental support
  • cleaner energy sources
  • economic factors
  • policy changes
  • peak consumption
  • significant improvement
  • shift
  • dips or slowdowns
  • economic recessions
  • governmental policy
  • investments
  • timeline
  • comparative analysis
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