The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008. Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer identifying the main trends and making comparisons where relevant.
The line chart shows
total
amount of four types Add an article
the total
renewable
Change preposition
of renewable
energy
(Hydroelectric power, wood
, biofuels
and wind
) in USA
from 1949 to 2008. The data was presented in Correct article usage
the USA
quadrillion
Btu
.
Overall
total energy
from all sources increase more than twice from 1950 to 2000. The highest consumable energy
is hydroelectric power , followed by wood
and biofuels
. The wind
is the least renewable source that used since 1980.
Hydroelectronic
power and Correct your spelling
Hydroelectric
wood
are the highest consumable energy
source
in the USA Fix the agreement mistake
sources
compare
with Wrong verb form
compared
biofuels
and wind
. At the beginning of 1950, total
consumption of Correct article usage
the total
the
hydroelectric was slightly below Correct article usage
apply
the
Correct determiner usage
that
wood
. But in 1960, there was a significant increase Change preposition
of wood
of
Change preposition
in
the
hydroelectric consumption from 1.7 to 2.7 Correct article usage
apply
quadrillion
Btu
, while
the
Correct article usage
apply
wood
experienced decrease
Correct article usage
a decrease
slighly
from 1.8 to 1.5 Correct your spelling
slightly
quadrillion
Btu
.
Consumption of biofuels
and wind
started from
1980 with a small amount below 1 Change preposition
in
quadrillion
Btu
. In the early 2000
, Correct your spelling
2000s
the
Correct article usage
apply
biofuels
showed a drastic grow
with total Replace the word
growth
energy
almost reach
1.8 Wrong verb form
reaching
quadrillion
Btu
. Opposite to the biofules
, the Correct your spelling
biofuels
wind
only showed a little increase with total energy
around 1 quadrillion
Btu
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, wood, biofuels, wind, quadrillion, btu with synonyms.
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