The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010

The map below show the village of Stockefort in 1930 and in 2010
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The diagrams illustrate the significant developments of the village called Stockefor from 1930 to 2010.
Overall
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, it is evident that the village has witnessed tremendous changes in terms of residential areas and recreational facilities during the period. In 1930, there was a long river, which
run
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ran
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from
southwest
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the southwest
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of the village to the north and there was
a
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farmland to the southwest of the area, at the top of that, there were constructed some buildings,
such
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as a post office and shops. In the centre of the area, there were 3 large houses, which were situated around gardens. To the north of
gardens
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the gardens
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, there was an educational facility. In 2010, farmland areas and shops were demolished,
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instead
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2 new roads were built, which
leads
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lead
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off the main road. In the centre, an area which is in the shape of
square
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a square
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was constructed and it is noticeable that housing was extended. New residential areas and retirement houses were added
to
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alongside the primary school and around the garden.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • infrastructure
  • facilities
  • landscape
  • sparse population
  • residential areas
  • commercial zones
  • recreational facilities
  • agricultural lands
  • local economy
  • transportation infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • public amenities
  • green spaces
  • quality of life
  • historical buildings
  • landmarks
  • preservation
  • urban development
  • environmental impacts
  • natural landscapes
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