The table below shows the numbers of visitors to ashdown museum during the year before and year after the refurbished. The chart show result of survays asking how they were satisfied with their visit during the same two period The table below shows the numbers of visitors to ashdown museum during the year before and year after the refurbished. The chart show result of survays asking how they were satisfied with their visit during the same two period
The table illustrates the number of visitors who
visit
both before and after Ashdown Wrong verb form
visited
Museum
is
refurbished and the chart presents the proportion of visitor feelings during attendance Wrong verb form
was
the
Change preposition
at the
museum
in both years.
Overall
, it is clear that
the number of tourists increases
Wrong verb form
increased
as well
as
a majority of them Correct word choice
and
enjoys
their visit after the Wrong verb form
enjoyed
museum
refurbishing.
To begin
with, the exhibition attendees jumped up by 18,000, from 74,000 to 92,000, after their renovation. The satisfaction of tourists in the year before the renovation,
occupied 15% extremely like and 30% satisfied. Remove the comma
apply
On the other hand
, 50% of the attendees were unlikely satisfied with their museum
visit.
After remodelling, the percentage of satisfaction of people shot up to a third-fourth ,around 40% of them enjoyed their time and
30% were spellbound, and only 20% of them disliked it comprising 15% dissatisfied and 5% very dissatisfied. Correct word choice
apply
In addition
, the number of no responses still remained the same as before refurbishing, at 5%.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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