The table below shows the numbers of visitors to ashdown museum during the year before and year after the refurbished. The chart show result of survays asking how they were satisfied with their visit during the same two period The table below shows the numbers of visitors to ashdown museum during the year before and year after the refurbished. The chart show result of survays asking how they were satisfied with their visit during the same two period

The table illustrates the number of visitors who

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both before and after Ashdown

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refurbished and the chart presents the proportion of visitor feelings during attendance

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museum

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in both years.

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the number of tourists

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as well

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a majority of them

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their visit after the

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refurbishing.

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with, the exhibition attendees jumped up by 18,000, from 74,000 to 92,000, after their renovation. The satisfaction of tourists in the year before the renovation

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occupied 15% extremely like and 30% satisfied.

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, 50% of the attendees were unlikely satisfied with their

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visit. After remodelling, the percentage of satisfaction of people shot up to a third-fourth ,around 40% of them enjoyed their time

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30% were spellbound, and only 20% of them disliked it comprising 15% dissatisfied and 5% very dissatisfied.

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, the number of no responses still remained the same as before refurbishing, at 5%.