The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. 

Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented flow chart depicts the systematic process of making
bricks
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for the building industry. In essence,
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process chart involves steps from acquiring a digger to
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clay and getting it delivered to the building industries. Commencing with digging the clay using an excavator, it is
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transferred to the roller which has a metal grid. Water is added to the sand in the following step which later on goes either into the mould or the wire cutter to give the shape of the
bricks
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to the sand.
Bricks
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are kept in the drying oven for 24-48 hours.
Bricks
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are shifted to the kiln which has a moderate temperature of 200 degrees
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and it rises to 1300 degrees
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in the next kiln.
Bricks
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are stored in the cooling chamber for 48-72 hours after which the packaging is done and the process culminates with delivery to the industrial buyers.
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