The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words.
This
table is defining
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defines
social
and economic indexes of Correct article usage
the social
countries
such
as Canada
, Japan
, Peru
and Zaire
.
In this
table, the first row is trying
to compare Wrong verb form
tries
annual
average Correct article usage
the annual
income
in these 4 countries
which has
been Change the verb form
have
showed
in USD. It shows that the highest annual Change the verb form
showing
shown
income
belong
to Change the verb form
belongs
japanese
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Japanese
people
and naturally this
higher salary will bring better
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a better
quality
of life
among
these Change preposition
to
countries
. The second highest income
belongs to Canada
which is lower than Japan
but still much higher than 2 other countries
. Unfortunately due to
economic issues in countries
such
as Peru
and Zaire
, the amount of annual salary in USD is much lower than 1 month
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month's
income
of people
in Japan
and Canada
.
Due to
better quality
of life
in Japan
and Canada
, they have longer life
expectancy rather than Peru
and Zaire
. The reason of
lower Change preposition
for
life
expectancy in 2
Correct article usage
the 2
above mentioned
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above-mentioned
countries
depend
on other factors like weather Correct subject-verb agreement
depends
quality
, food quallity
and level of stress.
Among the 4 Correct your spelling
quality
countries
, Canadian people
are receiving the hight
amount of Correct your spelling
highest
calorie
per day. Fix the agreement mistake
calories
Japan
has highest
daily calories after Correct article usage
the highest
Canada
and the lowest rate belongs to Zaire
.
Unlike low
rate of adult literacy in Correct article usage
the low
Zaire
and Peru
, the rate in Canada
and Japan
is almost 100 percent
. It's interesting that both Change the spelling
per cent
countries
have only 1 percent
illiterate Change the spelling
per cent
people
in the
society.
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apply
According to
the above comparison, we can find out that Japan
and Canada
are among developed countries
in the world and that's why the quality
of social and economic are high and acceptable.
This
comparison also
shows that 2 other countries
are among undeveloped countries
and as a
result
they have lower Add a comma
result,
quality
in
Change preposition
of
life
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