The line graph below shows how many people practised sports in Australia.
The given line graph provides information about
a
number of Correct article usage
the
players
in 4 different types of sports (baseball, tennis, badminton,rugby
) over twenty-year
period from 1985 to 2005.
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a twenty-year
Overall
, it is vivid
that badminton and basketball when the same till the end of the period. Correct word choice
clear
In addition
, rugby
was the most popular,by
contrast
it declined sharply by the end of the year .
Turning to the details, in 1985 the number of Add the comma(s)
contrast,
rugby
players
was 250000.The figure for rugby
went down slightly till 1995 by 50000, but then
the index decreased sharply to 50000 in 2005.The second,the most popular type of sport (tennis) In 1985 included 150000 sportsmen,whereas
the rate increased slowly until 2005 to approximately 225000.
Turning to other details, in 1985 the indicator of basketball players
was above 70000 and it was stable throughout the entire period. The figure for badminton included 50000 players
from 1985 to 2005.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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