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The table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
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According to
this
 data, the expenditure
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 tobacco/food/drink in Turkey was the highest data with 32,14%, respectively Ireland with 28.91%.Looking at the
overall
 structure, it is readily apparent that the most purchased point among
five
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 countries was observed by food/drink/tobacco, followed by clothing/footwear at the
second,
leisure/education items were shown the least figure on outlay. Italy,Spain and Sweden stayed
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 as
average
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 with 16.26%, 18.80%,
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%.
In addition
, clothing/footwear payments in Italy were the most outgoings with 9.00% than other countries which
remanied
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remained
 at more or less
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 (6.43%,6.51%,6,63% and 5.40%).
Furthermore
, the
last
 category was shown just below 5% by all of
countries
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. Spain had the lowest on spending their leisure at 1.98%,
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 was true for Turkey with 4.35%. At approximately 2%, the remaining categories have a similar value as the consumer record.
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  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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