Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
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The map illustrates the expansion of
Chorleywood
village
as It experiences a rise in its populatiom
.
Correct your spelling
population
Overall
, It is clear that
the village
saw the most development between 1970 and 1994. However
, from 1868 to 1883 the amount of expansion was less then
other periods.
From 1868 to 1883 the Replace the word
than
village
was extended from just one side
, at the right side
and in the northern side
of the Railway that was built later in 1909. However
, in the period of 39 years from 1883, Chorleywood
was extended more than in the first period. The expansion was made from the right side
the
main road, again and Change preposition
of the
then
, Chorleywood
Station was constructed in the area.
The village
saw the biggest rise in its extent from 1922 to 1994. Chorleywood
was getting bigger from two sides from 1922 to 1970, in the southern part of Railway
and at the left and right Correct article usage
the Railway
side
of the main road, just in the southern part of Chorleywood
Park. Then
, in the period that was initiated from 1970 and lasted for 24 years, 5 separate areas were joined to the hamlet which
all of them were near the motorway that was constructed in 1970.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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