Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus on reducing evironmental pollution and housing problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the majority of people believe that authorities should restrict environmental

pollution

and housing problems to prevent

disease

and sickness.

This

writer strongly

agree

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with

this

statement because these are the most important and the most common factors for a pandemic.

To begin

with,

polluted

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a polluted

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environment can play a role as a home to a wide range of viruses and insects.

Water

pollution

,

for instance

, is caused by high

level

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levels

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of fertiliser from

argiculture

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agriculture

and heavy metal substances from factories being pumped up into

water

.

This

predicament

trigger

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the

scrity

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scarcity

security

of pure

water

leading to people

ted

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to be more dirty because they do not have enough

water

for washing and

cleanig

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cleaning

as well as

being malnourished or poisoned

due to

contaminated food resources. What is more, too

many

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solid waste can

also

cause congestion in the

water

flow and result in the overpopulation of

mosquito

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mosquitoes

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, the

insect

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insects

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that spread malaria and dengue fever. For these reasons, if the governments take action about restricting

pollution

and protecting natural resources, residents will have a better living standard and

consequently

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there will be a low rate of illness and

disease

. Another point

needs

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to be considered is

housing

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the housing

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problem because it can

makethe

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make the

government's scheme to avoid

epidemic

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epidemics

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become useless, complicated and

inefective

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ineffective

. Housing

porblems

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problems

such

as building

house

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houses

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illegally, the deterioration of

residental

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residential

areas and homelessness can play a vital role in

allevate

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alleviating

disease

because it will be difficult for managers to detect the source of illness and control the number of citizens which

mean

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that they accidentally let the patients widespread the

disease

. For these reasons, governments should pay more attention

on

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accomodation

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accommodation

in order to regulate homeless people

as well as

those who build

house

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houses

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without permission so that it will be faster, easier and more effective to address sickness. In conclusion,

this

writer supports the idea that the authorities should make an effort

in resolving

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environmenal

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environmental

pollution

and housing issues so that they can address and avoid illness and

epiddemic

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epidemic

epidemics

from the very

begining

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beginning

.

This

essay has enough pieces of evidence to prove the writer's point of view.