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In the future, more people will chose to go on holidays in their own country and not travel abroad on holidays. Do you agree or disagree?

#future #people #holidays #country #travel
Whether individuals will make a decision to have a trip in their home
country
 over going abroad years later is an issue of public debate.
While
 each
country
 has its own places of beauty, I will
aregue
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argue
 that the number of the
travel
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travelling
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 over national seas will face
decline
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a decline
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 with
regared
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regard
 to some
barriars
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barriers
. There is a
widley
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widely
 held view among people that paying
foreign
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a foreign
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country
 a visit would be the holiday of a lifetime.
Although
 these types of trips could be an
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adventure
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 journey, they would cost a fortune. Being
extravagent
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extravagant
,
this
percisly
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precisely
 will be unaffordable for a myriad of
familis
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families
 facing severe
aconomic
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economic
 situation.
Additionally
, there is a second ground why the ratio of
over-seas
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overseas
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 travel might decrease in
following
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the following
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 decades. Humankind assumed to become more tied up on account of
importance
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the importance
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 of work and career in the
feature
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future
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,
therefore
, it may cause them heavy
schadules
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schedules
schedule
 with no free time to travel abroad. A
visite
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visit
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 that takes place in
geographical
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a geographical
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boundery
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boundary
,
on the other hand
, has a
nuber
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number
 of welcoming
aspect
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aspects
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 which benefit visitors and help them to have
much
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a much
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 more entertaining vocation.
Firstly
, it is feasible that in the future
the
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apply
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tourism
infrastruction
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infrastructure
 will
develope
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develop
 significantly in order to improve
this
 industry including better accommodation and recreational facilities,
and
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apply
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to name but a few.
Secondly
, speaking in the same language,
travelers
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travellers
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 find
in
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it
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 much more convenient to communicate with locals
as well as
 to
interigate
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interrogate
 with the familiar
surrounding
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surroundings
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 and culture.
Hence
, the risk of cultural shock and
homesickmess
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homesickness
 will be reduced. In conclusion, I argued that
traveling
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travelling
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 within a
country
 offers each one better
options
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option
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 to enjoy the holiday ,
whereas
, a trip to another state might have limited by some problems.
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