The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The graph illustrates data about the
population
in four different countries
living in urban areas from 1970 to 2020,and the plan of population
from 2030 to 2040.
Overall
,it seems that these four Asian countries
(Philippines
,Malaysia
,Thailand
,and Indonesia
) had approximately the same start,however
, the most rapidly developing country will be Malaysia
according to
the graph and the lowest per cent of the population
will be Thailand
.
To begin
with, the Philippines
and Malaysia
had approximately the same start in 1970 and had 31% and 30 % respectively, through the years both of these countries
had a sharply increasing population
and in 1990 the Philippines
got 49 % and Malaysia
got 47%. Furthermore
, the Malaysian population
has grown and has soared to 72% in 2024,and the predicted percentage of the future population
will be 80% in 2040. However
, the percentage of Filipinos has fluctuated and in 2024 get 45 % and in predicted will be 50 % in 2040.
Two countries
( Thailand
and Indonesia
),had the lowest percentage of population
in the graph at the beginning with 18% and 14% respectively. In the further
years,these two countries
have increased and could achieve the same result in 2021 with 28 per cent. In terms of Indonesia
, the line of community was growing from 2000 to 2010 and could get the same amount of population
with the Philippines
42 % respectively. While
the Thailand
people has
reached 35 per cent in 2024. Regarding the prediction,Correct subject-verb agreement
have
Indonesia
will get 58% in 2040. Moreover
, Thailand
will get 48 % and will be the lowest in this
group in 2040.Submitted by batirka06 on
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