You are going to have a party. You would like to invite a friend who lives in a city that is a long way from your home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: ▪️Explain why you are having the party ▪️Describe your plans for the party ▪️Suggest how your friend can travel to the party and where he / she can stay
Dear nazi,
I am writing a letter to you because I will have a
party
next week and I would like to see you in
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at
this
party
. I wholeheartedly invite you and I hope you will accept my invite
. Replace the word
invitation
This
party
related
to my daughter’s graduation. her friends and our families Add a missing verb
is related
also
have been invited.
In addition
, I have some special plans for this
occasion and my guests will be surprised with
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by
this
celebration because I considered a group of musicians and also
a group of professional dancers to entertain on the other hand
, I reserved a prestigious restaurant in order to serve by the way some gifts have been provided for our guests.
I strongly believe that you should travel by airplane
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aeroplane
due to
its convenient
whereby you will be a happy person when you Replace the word
convenience
will
come Verb problem
apply
in
my Change preposition
to
party
because you must have positive energy and you should not be tired. It goes without saying that I thought to
your stay in my home. Change preposition
of
therefore
, I allocated a suitable room to
you so, you should Change preposition
for
firstly
come in
my home after that both of us will go to Change preposition
to
restaurant
Have a best wishes,Add an article
a restaurant
the restaurant
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Greeting and Closing
Consider adding formal greetings and closings to make your letter more complete and respectful.
Single Idea per Paragraph
Try to organize your letter into clear paragraphs, each with a single idea, to improve readability.
Complete Response
Ensure your response fully covers all parts of the task. Include more details on why you're having the party, the party plans, and travel suggestions.
Suitable Writing Tone
While the informal tone is suitable for a letter to a friend, aim for consistent use of a more formal or respectfully casual tone throughout.
Complete Response
You have expressed a warm invitation and provided basic details about the party.
Suitable Writing Tone
The tone is friendly and personal, well-suited for a letter to a friend.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite