The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between

1972 and 2012.
The pie charts
provides
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provide
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data about the rate of
books
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book
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sales
that
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apply
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in 5 categories (travel, biography, children's fiction, adult fiction and others) by a bookseller from 1972 to 2012.
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